Hows this...i dunno what should happen next!?

This is really good it had perfect tension I'm a little disappointed that it stopped there lol. And whenever you edit it will be a whole lot better. Get to know your characters. Know what they would do in all situations and the rest of the story will pretty much write itself. Great job so far and if you haven't tried worthyofpublishing.com check it out. You can post the whole book or just chapters and people can rate it. And its said that publishers look for new talent on it plus its free. Good Luck.